Hello World!

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A ball of blue gray fluff scurried about the clearing mewing a the top of her little lungs as long dead leaves were flung into the air by her feet. Her eyes were dilated to their extent as she took in the area around her with delight. Just as another of the brown and almost completely crumpled leave flailed into the air, she pounced upon it.

Bluekit's little paws clasped her prey as she ripped it up with her teeth before bouncing about, finding another vicitim for her claws. It felt so good to stretch her legs, but it would feel even better if her sister were with her. Instead of feeling down about this, she let loose another burst of energy and ran around the nursery walls, only to feel her paws slip from under her at a turn.

With an oompf, she fell, her whole body spread out and her chin firmly planting itself into the muddy clearing. After the leafbare rains, she had been able to come out and play, but now it seemed the aftermath of it was her demise. Realizing her mistake, she grunted and quickly got back onto her paws. Her tongue began to slide over her fur to clean up all the smoodge. She only hoped no one had seen her slip up. That would truly cause her ears to burn in embarressment.

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Silversong walked through the forest coming up on her home, or others would say... clan. Her tail swishing back and forth lightly tickling the leaves causing them to fall slowly to the ground. Her paws lightly bounding across the ground sending no sound to show she was here. She opened her jaws to welcome a huge yawn as she passed an oak tree. She was only what seemed like a few minutes before the reached her home. As she saw the entrance she began to pad a tad bit faster only then realizing the prey in her jaws. She kicked up some leaves as her paw dragged across the ground for one second. She was only a foot from the entrance as, she began to crawl through the tunnel her sharp sense for hearing picked up the sound of... a kit falling?

She bounded through the tunnel and came back to the warmth of her clanmates. She loved being around everyone especially the kits. They were always known to be very friendly and playful. She soon saw a blue fur ball cross the clearing as she headed to the prey pile herself. She set down her prey and waited for her favorite kit of all so far, Bluekit. She watched as Bluekit picked up her prey, then soon followed behind. She tried to hold a back a laugh as she watched Bluekit fall.

"Are you okay Bluekit?" she managed to squeak through laughter. She didn't want to embarrass the poor kit but it was pretty funny. She managed to stop laughing as she laid down on the ground waiting for an answer from the hyper blue kit.

(How was that? I'm trying to get better at Third-person so i've been writing stories online to see how better i'm getting . )

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(Sorry Night, but this was a thread posted in the other style we had going back in February. Bluekit was remake of Bluekit from the books and so with the new revamp she can't be played. However, your writing has gotten amazing! I hope we can rp in a different thread soon.)

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