Post by Deleted on May 22, 2012 17:06:45 GMT -8
Nightshade had just woken up from a wonderful sleep. The arm had been warm, and everything was just perfect at the moment. She stood up shaking the moss off of her pelt she walked out of the den. She lifted her haunches and stretched her front legs. Then leaned forward and stretched her back legs. She had only become a warrior about two moons and she was feeling proud. She shook head head as a fly flew past her ears. She bounded over to the fresh kill pile and peered into it. There was few fresh kill, and she would feel better if she went hunting to eat. She didn't want to take food the elders or queens could use. She looked over at the entrance, everything was quiet considering she got up early. She padded over and bounded through their entrance or exit. As she entered the forest, she lifted up her nose to scent any food. She knew it would be plentiful around this time, but Shadowclan was never one for having good prey. She quietly slipped through some bushes only to have the scent of a vole hit her nose. She quietly crouched down and began to stalk forward every step making no sound. She soon came up to it as it was just sitting around. She wiggled her haunches and pounced forward landing squarely on the vole. She bit into its neck before it made any sound, and quietly sat down to eat. She opened her jaws and took a huge chunk out of the vole. It was juicy and warm. She loved hunting for food in the morning. This was something she could do everyday. The food was warm and tasted fresh for real. After swallowing the first bite she took another chunk out of it. She swallowed this piece faster than the other, she licked her mouth hungry to eat the rest. She soon was half way done when she decided to go hunting soon after this.
She took out the last bite then licked her paws, and started cleaning her face. She stood up and shook her pelt and bounded forward. She didn't know where she was considering she never explored a lot of the territory when she was an apprentice. She walked through a little mud before she came up to a cabin. It looked old and broken down. She bounded forward before she saw a pool and walked over to it. Soon a whole bunch of thoughts raced into her mind and she laid down to think. She had no idea why stuff she was hardly worried about at her young age raced into her mind.
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Yea how was that. I think i'm getting so much better at this.
She took out the last bite then licked her paws, and started cleaning her face. She stood up and shook her pelt and bounded forward. She didn't know where she was considering she never explored a lot of the territory when she was an apprentice. She walked through a little mud before she came up to a cabin. It looked old and broken down. She bounded forward before she saw a pool and walked over to it. Soon a whole bunch of thoughts raced into her mind and she laid down to think. She had no idea why stuff she was hardly worried about at her young age raced into her mind.
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Yea how was that. I think i'm getting so much better at this.