Ashpaw of Thunderclan

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Name: Ashpaw (Ashgaze)
Clan: Thunderclan
Age: Seven Moons
Gender: Male
Position: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Short Description: Semi-Large dark grey tom-cat with long fur and green eyes. Has a rather large scar on his throat, supposedly rendering him mute.

Description:

Ashpaw is a large cat, larger than most others. He has always been bigger than his peers of his own age, and because of that, most cats tended to stay away from him. His fur is long, blocking out the cold of leaf-bare. He is fairly muscular, one must make no mistake about that, but this strength is rarely used. His eyes are deep pools of green, showing just what a gentle soul he is. A large, disfiguring scar runs right across his throat, still pink, fur still missing from that area, rendering Ashpaw mute.

Attitude:

Ashpaw was always a bit... shy. He is humble and modest at most, but incredibly shy. So shy, in fact, he had to be coaxed out of the nursery on the day of his apprentice ceremony by his mother. Ashpaw, as a kit, never really played the rough-and-tumble battle games, but took more solace in the more gentler ways of life. When he began training, he was always hesitant to hurt his sparring partner, afraid he and his strength may do more harm than good. He spent more time helping out the medicine cat, even before he was apprenticed as a warrior, always preferring to care for cats, and to help and heal them.

One must not believe that Ashpaw is a coward. No, no. When he becomes angered - a very, very, very rare occurrence - it is best to listen to him, for he is rather wise for a cat his age. He has love and compassion for all living animals, and prefers to help rather than hurt.

History:

Ashkit was born to Falconheart and Talonfoot, both very respected warriors of a very long line of very strong fighters. He was the only kit, and his mother, Falconheart, was at first very proud of him. He showed the making of a great warrior, like his sire and dam. But soon, it became very obvious that little Ashkit did not have the strong heart of a warrior, like his parents, and, ashamed, Falconheart disowned him, giving him to another queen in the nursery to take care of. Soon after, both Falconheart and Talonfoot were killed in battle.

Ashkit had to be coaxed out of the nursery by his adoptive mother just to take part in the apprentice ceremony. He spent much time in the medicine cat den when he was small, curious of all the herbs and plants, and what they could do. In his heart, he has always known he has wanted to heal, but he has never really been able to admit it, feeling more scared than anything else.

Finally, a few days after he became a warrior, there was a skirmish at the border between Shadowclan and Thunderclan, and he entered in the battle with only a few days training. Needless to say, Ashpaw stood no chance, and a vicious Shadowclan warrior mauled him. There were huge gashes and claw marks all over his body, and his long fur was caked in blood. It was a miracle that Ashpaw survived. The worst injury of all, though, was the huge gash that ran from one side of his throat to the other. It had been meant to kill, but instead, it muted him.

Ashpaw spent many, many days in the medicine cat den, recovering. Finally, he has decided to walk the path of a medicine cat, for it was what he was destined to really be. Strangely, in his now mute way, he still finds a way of communication. It is if cats just know what he is trying to 'say'...

Mother: Falconheart (Deceased)
Father: Talonfoot (Deceased)
Siblings: -

Mentor: Riddlehawk, Rainwing
Apprentices: -

Mate: -
Kits: -

Password: Purple

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I wish to adopt him! :3

I would also like to make him a regular apprentice.
Also a few changes to his personality.

He's very much on the gentle side as well as very shy, but he is not a mute. Ashpaw just doesn't talk as much as a normal cat should, of course he may grow out of this once he becomes older. Though he is hesitant when sparring, he's not rough like the other apprentices are. It may not be great practice for his own training, but he doesn't wish to cause serious harm to his clan-mates. He always thinks before he talks or even makes actions, Ashpaw will never run out into a battle field without thinking it through first. It's just the way he is.

Name: Rukia
RP sample:
Green eyes clenched shut as his body kissed the rough ground. The rocks and dirt were embedded into his long, ashen fur. The young apprentice lifted his head and stared at his sparring partner. The apprentice was a little smaller than he was, yet that didn't matter as the tom showed great strength during sparring, the throw to the ground just proved it. Ashpaw stood back on his paws, but didn't move. He thought of his plan of attack, not knowing what exactly to do next. Yet at the same time he didn't want to hurt the apprentice, it was his clan-mate, he'd never forgive himself if he hurt someone else that he knew, even by accident.

The young tom didn't see the other's move coming, as he was in too much thought to realize he was still in the middle of a battle. His body made contact with the ground once again and rolled. The dust and dirt moving even deeper into his fur.