Nightcloud(star) of Shadow Clan

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Name: Nightcloud(star)
Clan: Shadowclan
Age: 18 moons
Gender: Female
Position: Leader
Short Description: She-cat with light gray pelt and dark stripes. with azure blue eyes.
Description:

She is a light gray with dark black stripes going across her back. She has a icy blue eyes. She has one white paw and the tip of her tail is white. She is sometimes aggressive but still gentle. She always remembers a cats face plus other cats pelt color.

Attitude:

She is a gentle she-cat. She may act strict at times but she would never stay angry. She loves kits. She loves the outdoors and hunting. She is always tried to help out when she can. She is agreeable at times when she isn't stubborn.

History:

She has no history. She cannot remember her birth parents or siblings if she had any.

RP Example:

It was a cold Leaf - Bare. Every prey was hidden in their dens for warmth. Then she hears a paw-step. She turns around to see a mouse. She drops down into a hunting crouch then stalks toward the prey. As she jumps on it and kills it. She takes it back to camp. After setting the prey in the stock. She heads to her den for some warmth.

Password: Clan cat
How did you find CCOTF?: This is my first bio

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A few things need to be fixed with this bio before it can be approved.

#1: The name. At COTC, we like to keep our names as cannon as we can. The term 'angel' is foreign to feral cats.

#2: The description. Descriptions need to be a minimum of 50 words.

#3: The attitude. Attitudes need to be a minimum of 45 words.

If these three things are fixed, the bio will be approved.

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(Spotted can I approve bio's too? I never got that memo on what I can do here to help you all)

Hey Nightcloud you're still a little short on the description. It's gotta be 50 words or more, not anywhere below. It's the same thing for the attitude...you're off 1 word.

Try using Word Count on a document program to help you out on the counting. It's a lot easier in the long run and you don't have to have your bio battered by approvers. They only do it to be fair to everyone.

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(( Yes, you can, Swifty ))

Swiftfire is right. And you're 2 words short on your description, as well as the 1 word short on attitude. We have a box up in the top left of the screen where you can paste your words and have it count them if you want to use it.