Flameheart//ThunderClan//Warrior

[flamestar]

Name: Flameheart
Clan: Thunderclan
Age: 20 Moons
Gender: Male
Position: Warrior
Short Description: Flameheart is a normal size, orange tom with yellow eyes.
Description:

Flameheart's pelt is slim and soft. He looks sleek and puny, but under his pelt are some strong muscles. He is also sleek and slim. He is a red tabby with bright yellow eyes. When he gets ready to leap, he squats as low as possible, then leaps. When he hunts, he hunts stealthily. When he battles, he battles with his heart and determination to protect his Clan. When he is angry, you can tell because his ears are laid back and you can see the anger burning within his eyes. He is a normal size cat as well with strong, sturdy legs. He looks like a Warrior who is more than a Warrior, he is a leader. He hopes one day to become leader, but he will wait, not kill, just wait. When he is determined, well, you can see it in his eyes. Some say when the sun hits his pelt, he is hard to look at because his pelt looks like the sun of a fire. Some other cats say that if he is sneaking through the undergrowth in a hunt, the prey sees him with his pelt before he sees it. When he is playing, you can tell because his ears are not laid back and he has no anger in his eyes or determination, except to beat the cat he is playing with or training. When he is happy, well, his eyes are bright and happy and he acts nice to everyone. When he swims and comes out of the water, he looks a lot smaller than he actually is. He is also a very fast runner and he is built for hunting and battling. When at the Gathering, his pelt is well groomed.

Attitude:

Flameheart is a loving cat. He loves all cats, except the enemy. He is fierce in battle and no one wants to fight him. He loves kits and would love a mate like a cat should. He can get really mean, and sometimes, out of control. Though he is fast, strong, and a great Warrior in all areas. Flameheart cares for kits and follows the Warrior Code at all costs. He gets annoyed though and then gets mad which can lead into a rampage. He has courage to help his Clan and great loyalty to his Clan and in StarClan. He would help anyone or any Clan in need, just as long as they aren't battling. He can be a vicious cat when needed. He treats kits like a mother would treat her kits. When he tries to call off fighting cats he yells at them nicely. He jumps to conclusions when needed but they aren't always the right choices. He is normally a very talkative cat. When in debt though to a fallen cat he is very silent for a few days. He won't let outsider's in. He won't let the Clan's bloodline be disrupted. He loves to hunt and battle, especially for his clan. That tells you how much he would give for his clan. He has hopes to one day become leader but will wait patiently for it. He is very good at training Apprentices in the ways of a Warrior. Although he has only had 1, he was very good at training him. Some cats say he is like the legend Firestar, some cats say different, no one knows.

History:

Flameheart was born to a ThunderClan Warrior named Vermontfur. His father was Zelkovafur. Vermontfur was more of a short haired brown she-cat with yellow eyes. Zelkovfur was more of a medium haired silver tom with yellow eyes. He was the first of 3 in the litter. Disturbedkit was a gray cat with short fur and glowing yellow eyes and was the 2nd of the litter. The last of the litter was Sunkit. Sunkit is a hybrid and got red medium fur. His eyes were still the same though, something you don't find on red cats that often, blue eyes. From when he opened his eyes and could talk the apprentices would make fun of how weak he looked. His mom got them to be quiet though. He loved to help with the apprentices though. He also liked to listen to the Elders. As a kit he would talk on and off.

He was made an apprentice and went to his first Gathering when he was 7 moons old. In a great battle where a lot of blood was shed he got injured. The battle changed his life. His parents and siblings died. He wouldn't speak for many days afterward. He was shcoked and lonely. He was a well-mannered apprentice despite how much he talked. His mentor who is now dead, Moondream once said to the young apprentice "Hunting and battling is not what you are made of, but what lies inside the heart, how you act." His training went well and he became a great hunter and battler. Now as an apprentice he was becoming smarter and talked a lot more. He became a Warrior at 12 Moons old, the normal age apprentices become Warriors.

He spent moons working on 1 thing, he was a determined cat to do what his clan needed. He fought hard in a perilous battle and helped the Clan through a major storm. After that he hunted and restocked the fresh-kill pile to recover from the storm. He has shown himself many times that he is a true Warrior. One time during the storm when a tree caught on fir and a kit was climbing in it, he climbed up and saved it and leaped out just in time to save him. He then after that, showed himself he was worthy of an apprentice. He got that kit as his apprentice. His name is Wasptail. He was Waspkit then Wasppaw back then. He trained him hard in the ways of a Warrior, then 2 moons ago, he became a Warrior with the name, Wasptail. Now Wasptail was a brave cat and fought in only 1 battle, that battle was 1 moon ago. He was fighting off a big group of Rogues and got cut in the belly. He battled it for a week, then he died. There was no use, he couldn't go on, nothing could fix it, StarClan was calling him. Flameheart's reaction was, like his siblings and his parent's when he saw them die. He stayed quit for a week, but this time even longer. He worked hard with him and they had become great friends. He is still very quiet to this day. He sleeps in comfort, at least he acts like it. He still every once in a while has nightmares about the battle. He is still hunting for a mate. He is also looking for another apprentice to bond with tightly again.

RP Example:

They were running, running side by side through the forest, something behind them not knowing what it it was. Ancientwind turned to fight it off. "Mountainpaw, go! I will hold it off!" Ancientwind yelled. "NO ANCIENTWIND! I can't leave you." Mountainpaw meowed back. "Just go, I don't want you to get injured, I want to tell you something, my old mentor once taught me this Mountainpaw, Hunting and battling is not what you are made of, but what lies inside your heart and how you act. I wanted to tell you that." he meowed. Mountainpaw turned around "If this is what you want I will leave." he meowed. He sprinted away and hid in a bush away from what ever was following them was. He watched, a huge wolf appeared out of the bushes. He immediately rolled in the mud to wash his scent away. Ancientwind growled, "What do you want!" The wolf growled back, "I want your apprentice, he is the most powerful thing on the face of this earth!" Acientwind growled back, "You aren't getting to him, he may be a great hunter and battler but that doesn't prove that." He lunged straight towards him and caused a nice sized gash in his shoulder but the wolf leapt on top of him and pinned him down, "Where is he, tell me and I will let you live." he said. "I will never tell you if I knew, I would rather die than give him up!" he growled and with that the wolf killed him. "No, no, no, this couldn't happen." he whispered. He knew his mentor liked him a whole lot but not where he would sacrifice him for me. He loved him so much! He turned with tears in his eyes remembering where his mentor, his great friend was and sprinted back to camp. "Firestar! Ancientwind died protecting me, I will take you to him, the tears were now rolling, he wouldn't accept this. He waited while Firestar got together a patrol, "Get great battlers." he meowed to Firestar. On the way he told him whole story. He cried all night and many nights after that. He once heard some cats say that his dad was a powerful, great cat, he was a fierce battler, hunter and a friend of Firestar's. They said he was a great leader and companion to him, but when he was born he died in battle, it was prophesied that the first son of this warrior which was him would one day save the clans and all cats from great danger. He didn't believe it though when he heard it though.

4 moons later
He heard them chant the warriors name, he was astounded, his warrior name was claw, he was Mountainclaw! He looked over at Firestar and his eyed told him, "Thanks for the name." they said and he saw him nod. He sat down and guarded the camp, he heard a growl, "I will get you." Mountainclaw looked around, his littermates didn't hear it, he was just hearing things. All of a sudden a wolf appeared in his head, "NO! Not you! I know who you are, you killed my mentor! You won't get me!" he yelled. The wolf replied," He was also your father. You are powerful, I have heard the prophecy, the full one, you must die! You will kill us all!" Mountainclaw replied, "Not true, he died when I was a baby! Stop trying to get me to fall for you!" The wolf replied, "They lied to you, he was your father." He replied back, "Maybe they did but I know they wouldn't." He shook the wolf away. Maybe he was his father, he always tried to protect him, no one knew it, now he was dead!

5 Moons Later
2 moons ago he became Deputy after Graystripe retired from deputy. Now he was standing in Firestar's dead looking at his dying body. As he breathed his last breath he looked up at him and said, "Ancientwind was your father, he loved you so much. I know what the wolf said, he told me in a dream, your can save the clans from dying, from extinction, you can save us all." he gasped then died. Tears formed in his eyes. He remembered how much he went through with him, Ancientwind was his father, he wanted to kill that wolf. Now his father and his father's great friend are dead. He felt so alone. His mother Silvermoon, would she react to this like she did when she learned about Mountainclaw's father? He padded out and choked out, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather for a clan meeting." He padded to the center with Firestar's dead body. He stepped back as each one payed their respects, he would go last like he did for his father's. He slept next to Firestar's dead body curled up. He still had tears streaming down his eyes. He felt another cat curl up next beside him, he poked his head up, it was his mate, Silverfur, then he felt his mothers warmth on the other side of him, he was alone now with his two cats that were great friends with him. The next day was a hustle, he had to get up early to get ready to go get his nine lives. He would take Jayfeather just so he could communicate with StarClan. They padded out of camp in mid-morning. When they got to the High Stones in the late afternoon, they were hot from being in the sun all day. They rested until dusk. Then they went inside, after they walked a while. Finally the wall grew into a cavern. There stood the Moonstone. They stood there waiting until the moon shun upon the rock. When it did they pressed their nose to it, he instantly fell asleep. He saw a cat appear it was Seetherstorm, "I give you courage my friend, to lead your clan into battle without being afraid." she said then stepped back. Ancientwind appeared, he said, "Hello my son and apprentice, I give you brains to come up with plans quickly when needed." he said and stepped back as well, next was one of his brothers friends, Cardinalclaw. "I give you strength to protect the clan." he said and also stepped back. Silentfur then appeared, "I give you respect to respect other cat's ideas." she said and stepped back. Turkeyfur then appeared, "I give you faith, faith in StarClan that they will lead you on the right path." he said then stepped back. Then Patriotleaf appeared, "I give you heart, heart to love the kits and everyone." she said also stepping back. The Stormclaw appeared, "I give you compassion to understand how people feel when he does wrong." he said stepping back. He kept on seeing familiar dead cats, So this is what it is like getting your nine lives and becoming a leader, I always wondered what it was like. Then Grovetail appeared, " I give you mentoring to pass on what you know from Ancientwind and teach the young cats." he said stepping back, each time he felt pain radiate through his body as he was given a life. Now Firestar appeared, "I give you loyalty to remain loyal to your clan and to remain loyal to the Warrior Code." he said stepping back and he felt one last wave of pain, he had all nine lives now. Firestar stepped forward, "Congratulations Mountainstar, you are the new leader of ThunderClan" he said then the rest of the cats started chanting. They then disappeared and he woke up, he saw Jayfeather already woke up. "Lets head back to camp now." he meowed. They ran back to camp and then they padded into it. He immediately went and curled up in his new den and took a nap.
The next day he padded outside to the fresh-kill pile. He picked up a mouse and took it to his den and ate it. Tonight was the full-moon which meant the Gathering was tonight. It would be his first Gathering as the leader of ThunderClan. He needed to appoint the deputy. He leaped up onto the Highrock and yowled the familiar summons. He waited for them to all come out. When they came out he meowed. "I say these words before the body of Flamestar. So that his spirit may hear and approve my choice. Tornear will be the new deputy of ThunderClan." He then listened as the cats of ThunderClan chanted Tornear's name. He then leaped down and padded over to Tornear. "Hey. He meowed then told him all the names of the cats who would go to the Gathering that night. "Can you tell them that they will be going."

1 moon later
This was Mountainstar's second Gathering as leader. He was crouched down ready to run down into Fourtrees. He flicked his tail then started running down with his clan behind him. He went immediately to the Great Rock to find the RiverClan leader there. Her name was Dawnstar. "Hello Dawnstar, is everything fine in RiverClan?" he asked. She replied. "Yes, everything his running fine. How about ThunderClan." Mountainstar replied. "Thing are running smoothly. The prey is plentiful." He then waited for the other leaders to come. The other leaders were, Dawnstar of RiverClan, Longstar of ShadowClan, and Snowstar of WindClan. They then got there and the called the meeting together. All the leaders went and he listened. It was then his turn, he stepped forward. "ThunderClan is doing fine, the prey is plentiful." he meowed then as he was about to step back, Jayfeather stepped forward. "What do you want Jayfeather?" he asked. Jayfeather called, "I have a prophecy that everyone should hear." he meowed and he heard mummers of excitement. He then meowed the whole prophecy, "The son of a Great warrior shall rule, No one can stop him on a path of savior, except death and destruction. He shall save the Clans from extinction." Mountainstar meowed, "Thank you Jayfeather." he meowed trying to hide fear in his voice. He knew who this cat was, it was him.

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Ok I really like thiss cat. It is very descriptive on personality and looks. His history is well put in. I woukd like to adopt this cat if thats ok. Like I said he is very descriptive. The only thing i'd like to change is his age I don't want him to be 20 moons maybe like 31 moons.

Name: Nightstar
Rp Example: Flameheart ran through the forest swiftly. He was alone scared and sad. He caught a whiff scent of badger that made him stop. The scent was fresh like it just passed through here. He smelled the air again and noticed it was... close. He followed the scent to Shadowclan border thats when ther scent left Thunderclan territory. Apparently the badger didn't live here so hopefully it wasn't a problem. He backed away from the border afraid to be caught. It had been days since he lost his best friend and past apprentice. He missed Wasptail and he wished he could make another friend like Wasptail.

It had been days since he followed the Badger scent. He decided to go check on it. He pulled him self up out of the nest and left the den. It was a clear and beautiful day. He walked out of camp and took a big breath of air. The air was clear and fresh. He was determined to protect the clan and camp. He went back to where he last caught the scent. He smelled nothing new everything was stale that ment the clan would be safe for awhile.