ADOPT ME: Eclipsepaw of RiverClan

[eclipsewing]

Cats name: *Eclipsepaw*} Eclipsewing
Gender: Tom
Age: 8 moons
Position: Medicine apprentice
Clan: RiverClan
Description: Eclipsepaw is a small, black apprentice. He has long fur, a long tail, and short legs. His eyes are amber. One of his ears is torn.
Attitude: Eclipsepaw is very active. He loves doing his job as medicine cat. He doesn't enjoy fighting. He has pity for anyone struggling for help, so he tries to help them.
Role-playing Example: Yanny stood up and opened her eyes. all she remembered was being knocked out by a falling rock. She couldn't tell if she was bleeding, as the current rain might have washed it away. She couldn't remember anything! She only knew a couple things; she was a cat, she was female, she was looking for something, and a rock had fallen on her head. She started to pull herself out of the hole she had been laying in. I must of been so tired I slammed into the wall?

Yanny closed her eyes again and stepped out onto the fresh green grass. It was still raining heavily, but Yanny didn't care. She just wanted to remember what she had been doing. If only I could find someone! her thinking muffled the sound of the rain pounding against the earth. At least she could still remember how to speak! Or did she? She opened her mouth to speak, but didn't. She was able to, but she didn't feel like it.

Now she need to make sure she could hear things besides her thoughts. She straightened her ears, and she could slightly hear the rain plopping on the dark dirt. Then her thoughts came back, I must be going death! That stinks! I would have rather lost my sight! That didn't happen, did it! I've had my eyes closed this whole time!

Yanny opened her eyes, relieved to see dark, swirling clouds in the sky. She wouldn't need to test her taste or feel, as she knew she could do that. She had tasted the rain and felt the grass beneath her paws.

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Jun 15, 2009 15:08:53 GMT -8 @eclipsewing said:

Cats name: Eclipsewing
Gender: Tom
Age: 33 moons
Position: Warrior
Clan: Shadowclan

Description: Eclipsewing is a large, black warrior. He has long fur, a long tail, and long legs. His eyes are amber. One of his ears is torn. He has very strong haunches to jump. He can run very fast and blend in with anything. He has one white paw and a scar on his eye. He has a long fluffy tail and amber eyes. His coat is sleek but still has fluffy fur. He is lithe and skinny. He is also very strong.

Attitude: Eclipsewing is very active. He loves doing his job as warrior. He enjoys fighting. He has pity for anyone struggling for help, so he tries to help them. He never shows fear and loves apprentices. He thinks kits can get annoying but he would never hate kits. He respects all of his clanmates and would never harm any of them. He will tear apart any intruder that threatens the clan.

Role-playing Example: Eclipsewing walked through the pines. Everything was marshy and cool. He smelled a unfamiliar cat and ran towards the scent. Finally he came to the stranger. He had a pack of cats with him and was planning an attack on the clan. He heard everything. He would attack the cat and its group if he had no sense. But instead he ran back to camp to warn the clan. Finally he got enough people who came back from patrol or hunting and they sprung in attack. He fought fiercly and brave. Soon they won and the cats fled onto another territory. He was lucky to notice the unfamiliar scent. He was glad to help the clan to. This clan needed someone to protect it besides the leader and he would do so.

I would like to adopt this cat and change almost everything. My changes are in the box above this typing.